On focus memories new logo!

Hello!

On focus memories has designed a logo today! Its not a definite finished piece of work but a work in progress any crituiqes are welcome! there are two designs in the works not sure which piece will be the final product feel free to leave an input!

this is the first try debating on this or the following which is similar but adds more of the name into it

Last of a a bit of a revised logo

Feel free to comment and leave an opnion on what you think of the logo!